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"Lu Jiawei" Is that a Chinese name? Its VERY pretty, its got wonderful bekzinski/Giger landscapes, like that crazy Scorn game. But just like that crazy Scorn game, you have to put something in that pretty world to do.

It may sound corny, but you need something to shoot. Something to kill. Its definately a good stare at the art game, but you're leaving out a significant aspect of the interactive videogame platform. Make it look good just like this, and then populate it, with things to kill, before they kill you.