I don't know if it's translation issues (author seems to speak another language), but the English writing hinges too much on adjective heavy descriptions, aka, too much "Tell".
Also not a fan of the use of ballads as chapter bgm (or just songs with lyrics in general during gameplay.), I mute the music immediately.

Info dump-ish writing is appearant right at the start, and I was hoping the game would recover later by spending more time on dialogues (which it did not)
I stopped at the beginning of chapter 2 because of the writing issue.

There is English support via the English interface and English subtitles.