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Steven_Burns
Not the kind of Starless I know
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Darkest Nightmare
Are you referring to the Visual Novel translated by JAST, cuz that is what I thought when I saw this game's title...
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Steven_Burns
Yes
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Chuck The Cryptid Hunter
Reminds me of Stasis
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goatkidman
Sundown dazzling day
Gold through my eyes
But my eyes turned within
Only see
Starless and
Bible black
Old friend charity
Cruel twisted smile
And the smile signals emptiness
For me
Starless and
Bible black
Ice blue silver sky
Fades into grey
To a grey hope that all yearns
To be
Starless and
Bible black
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Darkest Nightmare
Needs some discipline :^)
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smug
I like the concept of elevating low nukige culture into something beautiful and ethereal. It's humanistic. You could push it more though - relate more to the theme of hopelessness and self deprecation. I like that you were trying to use color as a motif (it's bible BLACK after all) but again, it could have been more explicit and conceptual. Good one mate.